Sunday 31 July 2016

W2T3

TOT! TOT! Hurry up, dad screams out the window. We were coming home from Auckland and we were not going to be home anytime sown, we pulled up at a bakery, cool , was my first response
We walked through the door to hear a loud beep from the sensor. We  carried on through to see four men, large and slightly rounded. They were ripping into a mean look feed, we one of them. It had five large pieces of chicken.
When i was finished i sore a dot i keep my eye on it but the spot grew and grew.        

1 comment:

  1. Hi George
    I liked this piece of writing but next time use capitals for 'I's and make sure it makes sense. But good effort.
    Thanks Daniel

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