On the top of the hill was a house, and in that house was a boy. The boy was scared of the dark. All was quiet and still, until the house on the hill went dark.so dark that the boy thort he saw a shark. The boy saw a flick of light and sprinted till it was in his sight.His father made him a stew which made him poo. The boy was angry at the power and he made a plan. Befor he went to bed. The candle still floated, as the flame flickered and then went out.
Hey George,
ReplyDeleteGood work George, the story was funny. To make it better you could maybe check your spelling. Otherwise it was good!!!!!.
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Hi George
ReplyDeleteThis is great but maybe check your spelling next time.
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