Sunday, 29 May 2016

100 Word Challenge T2W5


On the top of the hill was a house, and in that house was a boy. The boy was scared of the dark. All was quiet and still, until the house on the hill went dark.so dark that the boy thort he saw a shark. The boy saw a flick of light and sprinted till it was in his sight.His father made him a stew which made him poo. The boy was angry at the power and he made a plan. Befor he went to bed. The candle still floated, as the flame flickered and then went out.

2 comments:

  1. Hey George,
    Good work George, the story was funny. To make it better you could maybe check your spelling. Otherwise it was good!!!!!.
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  2. Hi George
    This is great but maybe check your spelling next time.
    Come check out my bloghttp://sserins.blogspot.co.nz/
    Thanks Erin

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